Sample 2
背诵6 It is generally believed that love is a hot topic which is most talked about.（意思重复，但是给人的印象很好）= > Love is one of our /the favorite topic today. This is true not only in China but also in other countries. We live in different countries and speak different languages, but love is something common to us all. The picture tell us a simple truth: love is like a lamp which shines brightest in dark places.
Love is most valuable when it is most needed. For example, once I saw a foreign lady get lost in the street. She could not speak Chinese and nobody seemed to be able to help her. Though my English is not very good and I am a shy person, I thought she needed help desperately(绝望地). I asked her what she wanted. She told me she lost her way, so I showed he r the way to her hotel. It was a small thing but she thanked me very much/a lot because my help was needed greatly. Therefore, My help was like a lamp in a dark place.
But how to show love may be different with different people in different countries. This is something we should give more thought to（more thoughts should be given to the way to show love√）.I think we all should be like a lamp in a dark place, showing our love, giving our help to others, even to strangers. In this way we can make this world a harmonious and peaceful world.(18分)背诵6
9个句子242单词 加深两点认识：老师写的，全是复杂句子
1．    文章趋势是复杂句子，基本上拿不到高分。
2．    全是简单句子，也不行。
*考试，考英语面掌握的宽度。句型多变化
2001年作文范文
背诵7 When we use the word "love" we do not simply mean an attraction to a person of the opposite sex, which is a very narrow definition of the word. The picture below illustrates the real meaning of love, by stressing the fact that love is emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes. In fact, throughout history people of many different cultures have regarded love as the noblest of human emotions.
As an example of the power of love, we should remember how the Chinese people of all nationalities respond to the call to help the victims of natural disasters every year. Although their incomes are still low by international standard s, people all over the country do not hesitate to donate whatever they can-be it money or goods-to help their needy fellow citizens. Moreover, they do this with no thought of gain for themselves.
In my opinion, the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. In this way, we can help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines. 背诵7
图表作文
粗线条；原因，没点拓展一下；措施建议
99年 作文 (三)评卷实例
Directions:
A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.